ok a couple of problem areas on this piece...the armpit...its very wide and the arm doesnt look like theres any bones in it. the hand however is nicely done(u really got a sense for forshortening). Another thing to watch out for is the torso, its way too long and it seems as if shes got extra ribs or something! lol. becareful of ur propotions. and make attention to the face, the eyes seem to far apart, the ear needs to be dropped down and the jawline needs reworking. i know its a lot to take it, but you are very talented and the more you pay attention to these things, the better artist you will become.
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ok a couple of problem areas on this piece...the armpit...its very wide and the arm doesnt look like theres any bones in it. the hand however is nicely done(u really got a sense for forshortening). Another thing to watch out for is the torso, its way too long and it seems as if shes got extra ribs or something! lol. becareful of ur propotions. and make attention to the face, the eyes seem to far apart, the ear needs to be dropped down and the jawline needs reworking. i know its a lot to take it, but you are very talented and the more you pay attention to these things, the better artist you will become.
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